Shots and Dialogue

The actual video needs to flow so I plan on firstly having a close up shot of a hand flicking through a small book then a bigger textbook and finally onto a big folder. I then want a separate fresh shot of the stern and bored/tired looking character looking flat at the camera in shot from shoulders.

I want him to then be on his laptop writing on msn or a instant messaging service to his 'dream girl'. I will make this look realistic by getting a member of my cast to change their name to a sweet girls name and then make it visible for the audience to see a lovey dovey conversation on screen ending in a negative for my character.

After this I think it would be good to cut to the football ground. So I am likely to use the local fields to my house at a pitch where my character can be in shot practising looking out of sorts. I want this to be a brief shot only 4-5 seconds long before cutting by the flow of music to the flowing scene of my character opening a door, crossing a room and sitting down in conversation.

This will now be filmed back at my house where I will zoom in on the knock of a door. The sequence will then zoom out an be from the view of behind the door as I enter the hallway. I will storm into the living room as the mother figure follows. This will then embark on a conversation with over the shoulder shots from one character to another as the dialogue changes bearing in mind the 180 degree rule.

Dialogue..

Poor Old Chap: argh thats it
Mum : well you know son , try again next week
Poor Old Chap: thats every week, I thought I'd be playing for city by now
Mum: (suprised) well just look at the big players nowadays they didnt all start young.. names average premiership players..
Poor Old Chap : Im gonna go have a shower
Mum: Your just not quite good enough, not yet (looking straight down camera)

I had the idea then that 4/5 other characters then all repeat the last line of speech from 'Mum' to emphasise the situation and to add some light humour.

This will then lead to the final clip of the main character looking down and this will be shown as an 'unhappy face' in a piece of food. Probably something similar to spaghetti hoops or even 'smiley faces' to add a tinge of youth and humour into the final scene. The final scene being integral to the trailer of the movie. That will be a close up before slowing down to put the 'mum' into shot who then shouts at the son before he replies with a witty reply himself to really top off the trailer and leave the audience in humour.

I think this could possibly be..

Mum: *name of character* thats it! dont you ever lock me out again like that again! it even started raining! do you realise, do you realise, its just not funny?! (shouting)

Poor Old Chap: (smirks)   alright big man , its baanter. BANTER

That I think could then lead to the title where the music will then run over the credits etc.